I'm not sure what kind of feedback you expect to be able to get. Are you worried about your gene being in-frame? We'd need to see the sequence for that.

I will say that the EGFP feature on your map looks tiny; it takes up more space in the original plasmid (https://www.addgene.org/17448/). Is the annotation correct? Did you intentionally cut out the GFP? Are you trying to make a fusion protein? What cloning method are you using? I'm guessing restriction enzyme method.

Do you have anyone else in your lab who's done cloning that can guide you through this? If you're new to it, you'll get a much quicker grasp of things if you can get help from someone over time and in person.