Dear Raniyah, 

I think you need to specify your question about the Environmental Science purpose, is it related with your dissertation? if you don't mind, may I know the topic of your research?

Actually I am now finishing my Doctoral Program on Environmental Science, I hope I can help you if you mentioned it specifically.

Regards,

Gilang

Dear Gemilang, Thanks so much for your answer.

My topic is about ANTIMICROBIAL ACTIVITIES OF STREPTOMYCETE ACTINOMYCETES COLLECTED FROM THE RED SEA IN SAUDI ARABIA.

Oh great, I think we can discuss more, your topic was suitable with my research concern. In my opinion, environmental science should covered minimum 3 points such environmental, social and economical aspect. So that is why you should explain how important this streptomycete actinomycetes antimicrobial collection for that three aspect. Beside that the point of view should come from the environmental side, the important role of streptomycete actinomycetes in the red sea ecosystem, then the important role of the antimcrobial in life science such as (maybe) human health, medicine, etc. and also the role of the research towards economic empowerment even in small or micro scale. If that already explained in introduction, you can formulate your purpose of your research : Why you should collect streptomycete actinomycetes antimicrobial? what is the important role? I hope this could help.

Regards,

Gilang 

Yes, I already explained in introduction and literature review. What do you mean by formulate my propose?

that's good..i mean from all of your explanation in intro and the review, you could formulate your research purpose statement easily..what is the problem that make you stuck with it?

Thanks Gemilang.

I can do that but what I need is someone can edit my writing and steps after I finish writing.

Can you do that ?

Oh You mean proofread your proposal? yes I will do my best to help you, can you send it through email?

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