Está muy interesante, aunque deberías plantearte en agregar más gráficas que demuestren tus resultados, y explicar con mayor profundidad tus métodos, yo soy lector hispano.
Only collaborate if you have copywrite of the data and are the primary author. And publish ASAP to minimise the chance of co-authors stealing your data. In fact, never collaborate! Then you have total control and your research can be more creative :)