I have written a full fledged paper which I am interested to submit in a journal on Covid19. The work has been done studying the application of Sensor actuators. I need a review of the abstract

which is as follows

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Patients suffering from a type I respiratory failure admitted to the hospital for respiratory ailments are to be diagnosed by the physician for identification of dramatic pulmonary changes for the possible long-term consequences of COVID-19 pneumonia. In cororna infected patients visual inspection can be used to appreciate the level of distress, use of accessory muscles, respiratory position, chest structure, respiratory pattern, and other clues outside of the chest. However there are no proper means to identify patient’s level of distress which should be immediately assessed, as those in severe distress may be experiencing impending respiratory failure that requires intubation. We sought to address this diagnostic gap using a non-invasive device which acts as a sensor-actuator to identify the accumulation of fluid in the lungs (consolidation) characteristic of pneumonia. This proposed prototype model is low cost and simple to implement and may offer a rapid and inexpensive method using principle of auscultatory percussion appropriate for general use and in areas with limited medical infrastructure. The sensor circuit can be modeled and the output of the artificial breathing pattern can be designed in electronic design software and the simulation results have been obtained. In this paper we analyze the different electronic sensor probes which can be used as a breathing pattern analysis in area of simulation and design.

I would like to submit the same in a conference and I am interested to find someone who will proof read the article and also find the best journal which will suit the work as I am from Engineering and working on a topic which deals with a respratory ailment.

Need your collaboration and remarks in this regard