Hello, we did not address the issue of translation specifically, but we focused on analyzing the style of a military chronicle. The analysis may help you set up possible translation issues for your work. The paper’s title is The Words of Warfare... If you wish, feel free to download it on my profile.
I wonder if you’ve come across (Translating War Literature and Memory in France and Britain from the 1940s to the 1960s), 2019 by Angela Kershaw. I think it an excellent study which will also help you locate other valuable references.