Hi Celina,

I have been working on bed net misuse questions in Kenya. I can try to assist you. I have worked some on malaria in Enugu state Nigeria with a doctoral student as well.

-Kacey

Hi Kacey,

Thanks once more.Please find attached up loaded.Please feel free,looking forward to a critical review.

Hi Celina,

i have reviewed the manuscript.

It has has some great ideas throughout but needs rigor and structure.

My primary concerns are that 1) there does not seem to be a rigorous methodology employed for deciding how to take the photos, thus it is very difficult to determine the magnitude of the problem. 2) it would benefit from a theoretical framework. 3) while you indicate there was a rigorous lit review you do not describe the process- IE databases searched, key words etc.

My suggestion might be to submit this as a commentary instead of a research article. Or use it as preliminary data for a research grant. You could also potentially shorten it for a short report but it would require more details on methodsand sampling....

Good luck and let me know if I can provide some more insights.

Kacey

Hi Kacey,

Thanks a-ton for the suggestions and the quick reply.I would work on it as a commentary but the journal in question does not have room for that.I will go ahead and work on it as suggested.Any suggestions for such granting bodies?

Grateful

Celina

Dear Kacey,

Happy new year ma'am.Thank you once again for the much valued critical review.Find attached here the revised manuscript,am preparing it for Malaria World(MW),it has 'Opinion' and not commentary and has only one detailed instruction on original articles only.This was my primary challenge until you graciously intervened.

How do I correctly address you in the acknowledgement as per full names,title,position and university.Please find attached,and I will be happy to revise further.Thank you so much.

Celina

Dear Kacey,

Not sure about Abstracts for Opinion,Commentaries and Perspective piece but since some journals have one general guidelines for all including original articles I thought I should generate one.Please find attached.

Grateful,

Celina