To make it more understandable, the above question is re-posted with rephrasing in the followings:

In the light of my teaching experiences to EFL University students in writing tasks besides a number of lexico-grammatical errors found in EFL novice authors’ published work as corpus of my thesis, I noticed poor standard of sentence patterns with improper diction and expression which requires improvement. Based on my REWRITE text as exemplified in my thesis, a more comprehensive exercise-book can be published for all L2 university students. Please find the following link:

http://www.journals.aiac.org.au/index.php/alls/article/view/2273

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