Dear Sayed

how about shortening it?

Export-led growth in Pakistan and its Supply determinants : A disaggregated Analysis

Kind Regards

Roland

Dear Roland

Thanks for contribution. it is very good. But here is the message is not clear, what the its show either pakistan, export and growth. If i convert it into

EXport-led growth and the Determinants of Export supply in Pakistan: A disaggregated Analysis

or

Export-led growth in Pakistan and Its export supply Determinants: A disaggregated Analysis 

what you think this is not good

regards

Irshad

Dear Roland

Please check this one also

Export-led growth and Its supply Determinants in Pakistan: A Dis-aggregated Analysis

 Dear Irshad

Simply remove "our" 

"Export-led growth of Pakistan and determinants of Export supply in Pakistan: A dis-aggregated Analysis"

Dear Mahmmod

Good but in one title one word is used only one time: So two time Pakistan and two time exports. Please suggest the good one

Dear Mahmood if

We convert it like this what you think it is good or not

Export-led growth and Its supply Determinants in Pakistan: A disaggregated Analysis 

thanks and regards

Irshad

Export-led growth and Its supply Determinants in Pakistan: A disaggregated Analysis 

It seems to be ok

Dear Sayed,

yes that one would work as well - my opinion.

Concerning my suggestion the word "its" would refer back to Pakistan so the ideas are still linked. Of course the level of clarity you require depends on your intended audience as well as the publishers marketability.

Good luck with your publication´, I know how tough it is, just had my first (coming this month).

Roland

Great Dear Roland

Please share with me then. My Ones is also accepted but coming in next issue here in Pakistan. Best of luck please share then with me

thanks for suggestion

regards

Irshad

Waqas above is correct!!  BUT  Add  "empirical" before analysis.